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Title: Home from Work
Author: [livejournal.com profile] pushkin666
Pairing/Characters: Gerard/Ray, Frank
Rating: PG13
Word count: 200
Disclaimer: See Community Introduction Post
Warnings/Enticements References to bdsm play (off screen)
Summary: Ray looks good like this - on his knees.

Gerard stares. Ray looks… hot. That’s the only word for it. With Ray’s job, he normally dresses casually. It doesn’t pay to dress up on a building site but when he’s meeting prospective clients, he’ll wear a suit and tie his hair back.

It’s a look Gerard loves. Having Ray on his knees like this makes him feel proud. It makes him want to wrap his hand in Ray’s hair and fuck his mouth; have Ray just take it. Ray of course knows what the look does to Gerard. He’d given him a shy smile as he’d taken his leather jacket off, put his satchel down and then gone to kneel in the middle of the room.

Waiting for whatever Gerard wants to do to him. Gerard glances to where Frank is sitting and watching - waiting to see what Gerard does next.

“Take your jacket off,” Gerard says. Ray obeys, his hands shaking a little as he undoes the suit jacket. Frank steps forward to take it from him before going back to his seat. Gerard slowly circles Ray before taking hold of Ray’s hair, pulling his head back and exposing his neck.

“Who do you belong to?” he asks.

Date: 2011-12-20 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kat-lair.livejournal.com
Mmm... I'm so with Gerard here. Ray with a shy smile and his hair tied back really does it for me too :D Love this ficlet, especially the open ending...

Date: 2011-12-21 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkxblackxrain.livejournal.com
For such a short peice it has so much going on. Wow

Also tho you're a total tease

Date: 2011-12-21 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weekendgothgirl.livejournal.com
Oh *flails* I'm a little in love with this. So short but so delicious...
Yeah I'd like Ray like that too Gerard ;)

Date: 2011-12-21 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weekendgothgirl.livejournal.com
Oh that's very true! Hmm you're on to something there ;)

Date: 2011-12-23 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
Gnrghflargn! *flails*

What you should do now, now is write me a fuckton more of this Gerard, y/y? :D

Love these guys, love this, love you :) Aweseome stuff.

Date: 2011-12-23 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkxblackxrain.livejournal.com
christmas fic you say? i shall be on the lookout

Date: 2012-01-01 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
Sit down and write fic :p (what? you just told me it works!)

I look forward to it

Date: 2012-01-01 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
No, wall-slamming is wall-slamming, right?

I am perpetually bemused by that kind of block as well

Date: 2012-01-01 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
Possibly your brain is more invested in it that you are? I'm working on commentfic at the moment that's 2.3k and counting and I have no idea what's it's trying to do. My brain is definitely more into this one than I am...

Date: 2012-01-01 02:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
Ah, avoidance then? :D

I would act surprised but, meh, who am I fooling?

It's drivel, I think. I have no idea what fic is trying to do but I'm not sure it's working...

Date: 2012-01-01 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamersdare.livejournal.com
People get defensive of their ship (or lack thereof). I have noticed this phenomenon a few times.

Well, I was. I'm kinda stuck now, since I have no idea what is supposed to be happening with this thing...

Date: 2012-02-03 01:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com
Love the scene and the hotness. (Finally got to reading - it's only February...)

Is it just me or hadn't he already taken his jacket off? Maybe replace second mention of jacket with shirt?

Date: 2012-02-03 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com
It's me then! I got confused with two jackets!!

Date: 2012-06-04 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desfinado.livejournal.com
...... oh.



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